Wow, that's truly great imagery-I love the phrases you choose. nice

I love it. It has good symbolism and description, and I can relate to it.

lovely, i loved the imagery and tone... this was so tragically beautiful... i loved the repeated verse 'For every drop is my tear/ Avictim to the velvet dark I fear/ Icry blood'

I absolutly loved this poem! Specially:"I am the silent angelEmbraced by the night of dayThe demons of this cruelty led me astrayI drew a picture of the memories I missWith razor kisses, the release of bliss"Thank you for your passionnate words

I loved the intensity of the emotion in this; the image of you cutting pictures into your skin for him (so powerful) keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.