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JtheChosen1
2008-10-08
ch 1,
abusethis was really good! a strange tale that is woven through mistaken idnetity! truly fascinating!
eurtreve
2008-09-10
ch 1,
abusesort of an odd place to end, but sweet nonetheless.
Lami
2008-06-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was a wonderful sory, I liked it alot :) Thank you for sharing it.

Lami./
Teldra
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoyed this!
nomy
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseits kinda late for me to read this..and review it now..but who cares! i like your story alot!..
but in case of me being an airhead..hehe..i kinda confuse with the story as in Tam, Tamrin or Rin in that matter is the same rite?..he is using Tamrin as the real name so meaning the Tam and Rin is just an escape or what?..is he really a sacrifices for god or you just see it as a guy that do the whole suicide thing?..
Laie
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! I'm so glad to see Tam finally happy!
Rock on an Ocean Shore
2007-09-23
ch 1,
abuse:D I gobbled up this story. I think the idea was ingenious. There are really a lot of interpretations to this story. My interpretation is that Tamrin had accidentaly killed his mother when he was little and fell into a blank stupor where he believed he was meant to be a "sacrifice" because of the shock of what he'd done.

The characterizations were great, and the pacing was wonderful. :D I applaud you.
The Intelligent Designer
2007-08-14
ch 1,
abuseI like this, it's cute and sweet. And also interesting.
Aimee Straughston
2006-11-16
ch 1,
abuseStrange but marvelous story.
s.tori
2006-07-17
ch 1, anon.
abuse... I am such a loser. I can't believe that I hadn't left a review >_< Er. Well, to explain:

I love this story. I read it once when I was tired, and later couldn't remember where I'd read it, so searched for a good while before I found it again. (And read it again. ^^ Of course.) As of about a month or so ago I finally printed out a copy that I keep in a binder of stuff that I read as bedtime stories. So, uhm, the long and short of this is, this story absolutely ROCKS.

I love the premise - a boy given another chance at life - but given a sort of 'fixer-upper' sort of life - the life of a boy who was definately not well-loved by those around him. I love the unfairness of it all - how Yasel has already determined him to be unchangably indifferent, and thus treats him as the 'Rin' he's convinced that Tam is. I love Tam's realization of his purpose - how he can heal the people. Most of all, though, I love the changes; I love how in the end, Tam is truly Tamrin. I love how he tells the truth while telling a story; I love how Yasel finally understands, and I love how everything looks like it will work out in the future.

Basically I love it all.

So just... yeah. If you ever get around to reading this... just feel the love, m'kay? And if you ever want fanart, just drop me a line and tell me so. #^_^#
Lady Psychic
2006-07-17
ch 1,
abuseThis is a really good story. It was well written and I liked the characters and the plot.
D.H. L'Orange
2006-03-24
ch 1,
abusehey! just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed this story! it was really cute!

: )

DH

ps: i've added this to my fav's list!
Would not Could not in a Bo...
2006-02-24
ch 1,
abuseLOVE it! yay Tamerin... dumb dumb Yasel but it was OK cuz they're in love. hehe. sorry for the retardedness of this "review", but i am very tired and very in love with your fic
Dream Fox
2005-12-29
ch 1,
abuseAw, cute story... you pulled it off really well! I really love the concept!
Amaretto
2005-12-12
ch 1,
abuseHow do I always miss your stories? Damn you woman. But aw *_* I love it love it.
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