Zonkers... this is an intense story lol and Adena's is so sad! T_T WHY'D YOU HAVETA STOP THERE?? LOL I like it, it's cool how the stories all intertwine and combine. I was really confused at first because there are like, 10 different characters, and so I was like, wait who's that again? but after awhile, I think I finally got it haha Can hardly wait for the next chapter!

great, will definately continue on reading it, beginning made me remember LOTR and the ringwraiths

You've updated! yay! Sorry for my late review. I was two weeks absent in front of our computer (due to studies and overzealous personality i have inherited). Anyway, thanks for updating! This one's a good chapter! Keep it up!
~Feyerah;D~

Do you know how 'bad' you are? Crap, I like the story why aren't you updating *raises brows, arms akimbo*?
Well, any way, this is my first review on your story. I've been watching it since it was just posted till chap 8. But you haven't updated yet for almost two months! Now that I have an account, I'm reviewing this. I really hope you'll update.
P.S. Sorry for calling you bad, no offense.
~Feyerah;D~

Sargeant Marina reporting for duty! ^_^

Okay, so I'm just letting you know I finished a potential chapter seven. Let me know when you get back, and I'll show it to you and you can make any changes you need to. Hope you like it!

It was interesting. I liked it, even though you made a spelling error or two. In the twelfth set of sentences (I think) you put captures, instead of captor's. Otherwise I liked it. Good job.

*laughs* I have always loved Talon and Aaron. Despite the fact that they don't have as large a role in the story as others, they are still amazing. They're a pretty good balance, too...Talon's all large and out there and "DAMN!" and Aaron is soft-spoken and lovely in general. So it's nice to see them again. *grins* Keep it up! ~Marina

NICE BUNNY XD Me likey muchly! Go Bunny! Go Bunny! Write more! NOW XD

YAY FOR DANTE! *grins* I love him...he is so amazing. This was a nice intro chapter for him...he's living up to his 'gentlemanly bandit' rep. So sweet. ^_^ Was Kamesh in the first draft? Didn't he serve under Leo? Because I think I remember him. Anyhoo...update soon, Bunny! This is looking good! ~Marina

Holy crap. Brenna. I love you for this. *grins widely* This was a GREAT first chapter! Do you KNOW how much your writing has improved? This is amazing. You've really pulled it together. There's more of a background to Tacala here and...wow. Just wow. *is finding it hard to really put words to it*

Oh, Vicious. How can you be so cruel? *loves him, though* At least he's still as hot as ever. *giggles* So sad about her mother, though...I'm glad he didn't kill her, though I was expecting him to. And I'm really liking the Notra character...is she going to be important later? Because that was seriously cool.

*is beaming* This is lovely and looks like it's got a lot of potential. Keep going and if you need to rant at me, feel free to do so. I'll just drool over Vicious when you're finished. *winks* Later, darling! ~Marina