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| Cyssel 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked the way you started, with a question, and throughout the poem the dialogue didn't seem overdone at all. Like the way it flows from one 'dialogue' to another, if I may put it that way. Nice job, as usual. ^^ |
| negligible fictional force 2006-02-02 ch 1, | abusegot to love that dose of madness, & the glorious, glorious sense of dialogue. |
| really 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseCynical, again. It must be the new BLACK. Haha I liked the centipede stanza OHOHOHO. I get what you're trying to achieve, and your punctuation is used with good effect. |
| poetic abortion 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abusepretty. ~* noelle |