I liked the way you started, with a question, and throughout the poem the dialogue didn't seem overdone at all. Like the way it flows from one 'dialogue' to another, if I may put it that way. Nice job, as usual. ^^

got to love that dose of madness, & the glorious, glorious sense of dialogue.

Cynical, again. It must be the new BLACK.

Haha I liked the centipede stanza OHOHOHO.

I get what you're trying to achieve, and your punctuation is used with good effect.

pretty.

~* noelle