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Cyssel
2006-02-11
ch 1,
abuseI liked the way you started, with a question, and throughout the poem the dialogue didn't seem overdone at all. Like the way it flows from one 'dialogue' to another, if I may put it that way. Nice job, as usual. ^^
negligible fictional force
2006-02-02
ch 1,
abusegot to love that dose of madness, & the glorious, glorious sense of dialogue.
really
2005-11-25
ch 1,
abuseCynical, again. It must be the new BLACK.

Haha I liked the centipede stanza OHOHOHO.

I get what you're trying to achieve, and your punctuation is used with good effect.
poetic abortion
2005-11-24
ch 1,
abusepretty.

~* noelle
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