this is pretty good...a little too philosophical for me but still good! i like the advice at the end and i agree...life is not for analyzing and obsessing but for living. i sort of lost u when u were talking about the best seller...but anyway, great job! keep writing,

~mez~

I can relate incredibly well to this. I answered yes to all the questions... now are you going to tell me something about my personality or what perfume is right for me just like those stupid quizes in magazines? Lol... i thought this was a very good poem... contrary to what your friend said and i think it's nice to have something that people can relate to. Keep it up!

I really love this. I can relate so much and I know I over analyse far too much! Thank you so much for your last review, it means a lot. QueenVixta

Nice analogy (for lack of a better word, frase, etc) I know exactly what you mean. And, jsut to let you know, this is good so "bah" to whoever said it wasn't.

Very honest. Kind of outside of yourself viewing things from a substitute perspective. Nothing wrong with mentally dissecting your choices and actions.

this poem was great"Your whole life is a low budget"great line. your commentary was funny too

Loved this poem. Very well written.

Blast! Until I read this I had actually stop analysing everything I come across in life, but this poem gave me reason to start again. Aargh!! (It's a good piece tho, haha)

Am I the one who told u that?=S well..i dunno..it's a good poem actually i like it !