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Reviews For: Confession of Colours

The Postscript
2006-07-17
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abuseIntriguing idea - Confession of Colours - you reach out to it as something that you can't quite touch. Wonderful job. Keep writing, s.
Ben Wuest
2005-11-25
ch 1,
abuseFantastic. Riveting. Two thumbs up.

B.
Maisha Mafuriko
2005-11-25
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abuseGotta say I really got into this writing you have penned. It is beautiful in a dfferent sort of way..

Stark reality conveyed
J-Kid
2005-11-24
ch 1,
abuseI really love this poem. The wording is beautiful, and it's very well put together . . . the only thing that doesn't seem to fit is "I you look closer however you may see\The festering bacteria that lies behind." Especially the second half. I don't know why. But it seems jarring somehow. Will add it to my favorites list.
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