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| The Postscript 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseIntriguing idea - Confession of Colours - you reach out to it as something that you can't quite touch. Wonderful job. Keep writing, s. |
| Ben Wuest 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseFantastic. Riveting. Two thumbs up. B. |
| Maisha Mafuriko 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseGotta say I really got into this writing you have penned. It is beautiful in a dfferent sort of way.. Stark reality conveyed |
| J-Kid 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseI really love this poem. The wording is beautiful, and it's very well put together . . . the only thing that doesn't seem to fit is "I you look closer however you may see\The festering bacteria that lies behind." Especially the second half. I don't know why. But it seems jarring somehow. Will add it to my favorites list. |