I like all your stuff because it all rhymes! alot of people don't care about that anymore but I think its awesome. Keep it up.

i think i love you, and I know i love your poetry. XD :just kidding about the loving you part x.x:I really adored your poetry. Something that is wrong with the world is that there are not enough talented men out there, but I'm so glad to have found this one. =3 I guess it's true, what they say about sadness spilling the best words onto the asphalt.

For some reason I really don't like the repetition. It just bugs me, I can't explain why. I really like the poem itself, though, especially the second part of the stanza that repeats itself most often: "but the shape of his lips and the curve of his tongue/give rise to a greetingk, for his day's not done." I like it.

Good use of rhyme and the rhythm holds steady for the most part. I like the repetition - adds a nice effect and creates a sense of style and character.

I liked this... it's cool. It takes some talent to make a rhyming poem sound unforced, which you did well. Reminds me of walking down a street... don't know why. Nice job!