Reviews for wind beneath my wings

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Mac 2007-08-24 ch 6, anon.	abusethe plot's interesting enough, but you need to work on your writing/grammar. It's disjointed, seriously lacking propper punctuation, and there's no development. It just whooshes from one thing to another, and there are random/immature things thrown in that are completely unnecessary.
kris89 2006-12-22 ch 14,	abuse"menace to society" i love that. im going to be saying that all weekend.
storyteller 2006-11-14 ch 22, anon.	abuseI read wind beneath my wings, i really enjoyed the story and loved the idea. I am a professional writer and have published 3 books. I just wanted to make a comment. You jump around a lot. Sometimes you have great detail but you change topics. If you could sit down and finish your idea before moving to the next one and widen your scope you'de have an amazing story. I am hoping to write a story about your winged creatures. I'd definatly change the story but I will give you full credit. I was hoping that you will allow me to do this and give me an idea and details of your creatures. You are an amazing writer. I'd love to read some more of your stories. Maybe i can read and edit them for you. Please get in touch with me...we can write my next book together... Jennifer
Pixie in a Birdcage 2006-06-28 ch 13, anon.	abuseAw! Don't be like that! I like your story. Though I've noticed that you have a chapter posted after this so you couldn't have been depressed for too long after this. Right now I'm at work... sort of. I hope angel guy will stop his rampage sometime soon. I don't like war... Well, that's all I've got to say right now. On to the next chapter.
holly harper 2006-06-11 ch 22, anon.	abusethis story was so good! you need to write more stories! I also love your name! she is my favorite goddess!
Pixie in a Birdcage 2006-06-10 ch 11,	abuselol! Oh god! Please tell me the war hadn't started while Machidiel was hanging out with Analia. Now that would be disasterous. Hehehe, you know everyone was waiting for a lemon during that bath scene. But you were just teasing us you horrid, horrid wench! lol. Btw, I'm moving to England next week so I probably won't be able to update HGQ for a while. My computer's going to be gone in a couple of days cries
Pixie in a Birdcage 2006-06-10 ch 7,	abuseWell, at least Machidiel is going to take responsibility for his child. And I was kinda wondering if Sya was evil. She came across to me as the evil type with the way she seemed to have Machidiel under her control and how she seemed to have something against Analia. I wonder, could she have developed some cleverly disguised feelings for the black Angel after spending some time with him? I guess I'll find out later. Thanks for the reviews! They totally made my day, and it was a cleaning day too! And no, I wouldn't consider it stealing my idea if you create a character with white hair and pale eyes. My idea wasn't very original in the first place so it really doesn't matter. Anyways, I'm going to read more of your story and prolly write another review. Thanks again! -Jules
Holly Harper 2006-06-01 ch 13, anon.	abuseNO! if you don't finish my life will never be complete. keep writing!! i demand u to
Holly Harper 2006-06-01 ch 4, anon.	abusethis is getting good really good keep going. you are very good at writing stories but what does Analia look like?nice name is it after the greek goddess(who is my favorite)?
Pixie in a Birdcage 2006-05-11 ch 3,	abuseOh my goodness, it's like Jesus!! Lol, I'm sorry, that's just the first thing that came to mind.
Pixie in a Birdcage 2006-05-08 ch 2,	abuseCan we say, mood swings? Going from angry-hate-gr to steamy, sweet love-making, now that's quite random. But what a he is in the end. Leaving after a quick ? The least he could've done was help her make break-fast. Where are his manners?
Pixie in a Birdcage 2006-05-08 ch 1,	abuseOh my! Angels seem to have an interesting effect on women. If I were Analia (I adore the name btw), I'd be totally jealous of this Sya woman. Mister Angel Man must be pretty damn fine. On to the next chapter! PS. I promise, promise, PROMISE, I will finish this verison of Half Grace Queen (formerly known as A Perfect White) I have it planned out from start to finish and already know what I'm going to do for the next three chapters. Be patient with me, darling, I'll get it right this time.
StoryJunkie 2006-04-16 ch 9,	abuseI can see you love tragedy, irony, all that sort of thing. This is a pretty good story, albiet it seems almost like a synopsis of a story. Nevertheless, it is very interesting and I am eager to read on to see what will happen when the black angel meets his daughter
StoryJunkie 2006-04-16 ch 6,	abuseI had no idea that Sya would or could speed up Analia's pregnancy. That was very clever of you. This story is quite interesting and cohesive as well. You have quite the imagination
StoryJunkie 2006-04-16 ch 5,	abusewow, the action is non-stop! It feels a bit rushed, but truly, a fantasy. I like dark angels and white angels. Too bad I always fall for the bad boys. Darn you anyway for knowing that!

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