This poem is truly inspiring! The use of repitition really adds a punch to the overall feel!! 4 out of 5 thumbs up!!

I love this...interesting style. Cool ending.

Short but effective, hun! I especially love how you worked in the contrasts. I liked the air one best. really creative. I also liked "just me, overlooked and looked right through." Nice!

Wow - amazing contrasts!

"Like air, only people need air." That, too me, was the best line ever. It really conveys that sense of hopelessness that was introduced in your summary. What came to mind when I read that was "But everyone need AIR. No one needs ME."

Excellent work. I hope you don't feel invisible like this. Your writing has made you stand out! Happy (belated) Thanksgiving:-) -- J.max