Aw, I like it! And my thing was a Oneshot...not a story. But I don't think that this was corny!

Ugh! That was so NOT corny. This was good! Hey, thanks for reviewing 'Fat is an understatement'. How the flipping jacks did you find it anyways? It must've been hidden along with all the other lost stories of our time...Sorry. Off-topic!

Black Feather Quill

Wow you're right, that WAS corny. But I LOVE corny poetry! _ I have a few corny poems..hehe. I did like this, the middle section was nice but you may want to look at the ending a bit more. Keep writing!

ScareCrow

I didn't think it was terribly corny. I thought it had a bit f truth and taste in it.

-Syrins