aaw... sad.. but for a 9 year old kid he's forgiving.. i love his attitude.. he's so understanding! what happens to him? that's it?? so it was basically about lillith and kale... uumm.. and zachary is just like a pawn to the story.. wow.. you shoulda done something.. turned the tables around and it's about zach all of a sudden.. you know..

WOW!u have a talent for writing! even if it is qiet sad, update soon!

sniff... snif...sniff... ur stoet is good, mate! its just so sad! but any way please upadate SOON!

that is soo sad! why did you make her die? :cry: well it was good anyway

That sorta ruined it for me... it was so depressing...

that was a sad but good chapter I hope everything works out for the kid.

OMG! That is so sad! Don't let them be abusive drunks, plz! That's so sad. Aw, but I love it! Write me some more! lolz

UPDATE SOON!

~Nikkole~

Interesting Story. Write More.