wow, i love the lion he's so sweet. Your poetry is so much better than the ones in the stupid anthology. Damn "the collar". anyways this is really good, and long. you have stamina man, i get bored and wander off, which in response is why i have not and will not write anything for a while. :) keep up the good work and i will finish before this becomes an essay! :)

It's interesting (needs a bit of editing though) and whenever you talk about that Lion I just keep thinking of God. Well all in all very well done.