AWESOME! This is soo awesome and it is only chapter three! You just plainly HAVE to update...And soon!

hey... i really like this story.. keep updating :)

oh my god you absolutely HAVE to update. you should see the look on my face right now - it's pretty serious. so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE i don't know if you're busy or if you've just lost interest or whatever, but i REALLY need you to update because you had me at the prologue. i am so addicted right now...and VERY sad that there aren't any more chapters to read. so please UPDATE! or i'll be very mad. and possibly start hounding you DAILY to update.

do it for the good of mankind. update!

hey all i did was read the summary, i gotta go to bed, but i think this might be worth reading, got my attention already, and I haven't even read a single sentence from the first chapter, just the summary.

its very good. all u need now is to write more and post more often. :)

haha actually, i like him even more. he's such a great character! all upset, and hateful, and then confused. hehe this was a great chapter!!

i got a bit confused when you were talking about Carlyn, and the Dobriks...then i kinda figured it out.

Good chapter!!

-L-

haha. its easy. my friend taught me.

this is really really good!!

♥k a t 1 e

are you going to do this two person pov on the same event a lot?

Well if you really want to know you can read my story "Goggles" it is about me and it gives my physical description. If you still aren't sure then ask again. lol. k on to the story. Holy hell this chapter was long. God damn you can right a lot. good work i think derek is the man. Pce MJ

Oh! I just read this chapter and the last. Hahahahha. Good! I think I'm getting ahead of myself. I keep on imagining how he would (try) to kill her or her brother. Man. Hahahhahaa.

Wow. This was an especially good chapter. Do you know that i love stories like this? They're rollercoaster rides of conflicting emotions. I think Derek's gonna fall for Elle and get over Steph. (I think it's weird that i enjoy EVERY single story of yours, this has never happened to me before!)Anyway please update soon! You said you wanted to finish this one! (Hey, if you've got time won't you read 'In the eye of the tiger' by 'Ameliebabie'. You'll like it, trust me).

lol...things are moving pretty fast...sorta hope the guy with start liking elle! And the bebrik twist is pretty cool!

mm;P it sounds good! actually, it sounds freaking awesome. hehe. hay ya know what? i love All Along and myrika's work too! i saw your reply,=) i like how intriguing Derek is. and i was wondering if steph knows derek likes her? the plot is terrific;P

I like where it's going! Please update as soon as possible, dude!

lol, I like it so far. Something fresh.