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| she's not breathing 2005-11-25 ch 1,  | abusei love your poetry style. there's a subtle flair to it, an elegance, as if the life you write about it somehow higher than mine. and i love the play on words in this, the waterfall and the leaf/leaves. the theme of the poem, too, the association to nature. even the summary about wanting someone to share the fall - that's profound. it changes the way you read the poem, in a really good way. ~k8 |
| White Tea and Ginger 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. |