I can really relate to this poem. I remember when I went to summer camp too. I hated it. I really wonder if there are people out there who actually enjoy summer camp?

This poem gives off a lot of emotions and a lot of images come to mind as I read this. This is a beautiful piece of work.

It's no mystery why this won an award-- it's absolutely lovely! Love the rhyming and how very well it all flows together... Superbly done!

it won a contest, huh? oh good - if you've won a contest with it then i doubt i need to give anything more. okay that's a cop-out. i'm really sorry camp was that horrible an experience to write this, but i just didn't - it's like emotion strung together. which is awesome and i do commend you for it, but poetry is more than that. well to me. but it's different to everyone, so if you won something with this, then good on you. and i shall stop before i offend you.

~k8