It does make sense, and it's very cute -- looks like published song lyrics to me. =) I'd love to hear it put to music. What kind of genre are you thinking with these?

Fantastic! ^_^ Yay, go you! Keep them coming!

~Anna~

This is such a sweet song, especially the second verse. I was feeling quite down earlier but this song just puts a smile on my face.

EB

Love it.