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| Moonlite Star 2006-08-14 ch 1,   | highly improbable - yes, i agree. entertaining - indeed. :) more details would be nice though. heh, dunno if you know this, but an interesting fact: im not too familiar with ancient cars and their trunk locks, but nowadays, newer cars should have an escape lever (hmm that may not be the right word for it...) built inside the trunk so that if anyone is trapped in it, they can easily get out by just pulling on it. :D keep writing. |
| Punk'N'Rock Chick 2006-08-11 ch 1, | WOW!that was a great story... |
| kisstherainn 2006-07-13 ch 1, | Entertaining? Yes. Definetly. Shows why hair clips are important in case of kidnapping:) |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2006-06-16 ch 1, | Highly improbable, yes. Highly entertaining, yes as well. But though it's not likely to happen any day, seeing all the problems in our world just makes this seem as probable as ever, so good job on it. Very descriptive and well-written. Each sentence flowed very nicely too, so more praise on that. Off to more of your work then... Heh. |
| warmdecember 2006-06-16 ch 1, | Wow. Yes very entertaining!! I like one-shots |
| fairEtales 2006-04-04 ch 1, | Entertaining? Of course! |