|Reviews for ReWrite in English 11b|
| Myufisian 7/22/06 . chapter 1
I have never been in this situation, but I can imagine. I've felt this way in other ways before. I like this poem and it has a lovely conclusion.
| indentured-servant 1/11/06 . chapter 1
| Unready 11/26/05 . chapter 1
This piece captures pure emotion
| easilyjaded 11/26/05 . chapter 1
I also love the way you capture emotions. Brilliant metaphors and overall a very well-written poem.
| eldrin 11/26/05 . chapter 1
You do have a splendid way of capturing thoughts and the emotions embedded with those thoughts. Simply delightful.
| Naibz 11/25/05 . chapter 1
heh, all the D shows is that you are unwilling to memorize useless shit. so dont feel bad. school is pretty much a waste of time. all it is is forcing you to memeorize shit you are going to forget later anyway. it's more of a grading of your memorization skills, not your Intelligence. now that that is out of the way. good write. had some good imagery and metaphors in this piece. keep writing.