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Maisha Mafuriko 2006-01-11 . chapter 1
Ahh and so too you are a person of the evengingtide as night descends...

M the scent of the smoky embers giving warmth as raindrops from vast the heavens meets with the earth.

~Connie aka Maisha
D.H. L'Orange 2005-12-01 . chapter 1
ah... and yet another lovely poem! (you've got a secret stash in your sock drawer, eh?)

loved the concept of this poem... and these lines especially caught me

" Swallowed by the dark rain wall"

"slicing pinions among the trees"

"the hiss of raindrops parting"

"resin scented smoke is borne"

: )

DH
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