| Reviews for Seeping night |
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Maisha Mafuriko 1/11/06 . chapter 1Ahh and so too you are a person of the evengingtide as night descends... M the scent of the smoky embers giving warmth as raindrops from vast the heavens meets with the earth. Connie aka Maisha |
D.H. L'Orange 12/1/05 . chapter 1ah... and yet another lovely poem! (you've got a secret stash in your sock drawer, eh?) loved the concept of this poem... and these lines especially caught me " Swallowed by the dark rain wall" "slicing pinions among the trees" "the hiss of raindrops parting" "resin scented smoke is borne" : ) DH |