very interesting. i'd like to read more. okay, i'm particularly interested to know why bakio hates her and wants her dead?? very interesting plot, but the general feeling is very sad (i know that's her name, but the story sounds very sad). i'm not sure you'll be getting 5 reviews as i doubt anyone actually sees. i found it through browsing another account that u reviewed. and i read ur other story (which i had reviewed but can't remember the name, but very intriguing story which i hope u'll update soon)
hope u'll update soon anyway, at least, it will be bumped up so more people can actually see the story...

i loved loved loved this begining. and the summary is catchy! i think its cool how its written in first person. i can never write like that, and its an autobiography! wowy, very creative mind. i liked your characters names. although i really dont know if im pronnoucing them right lol. well keep updating i'd love to read more!

Saleinaenachiya.

ps. i would love to hear from you!