 Narijima 2006-08-03 . chapter 1A very succint, eye-catching way to get your point across and portray a feeling. Nice job. |
 simpleplan13 2005-11-27 . chapter 1i liek sylvia plath so koodles on the inspiration.. the poem is short and cool.. true for a lot of people too |
 This Modern Love 2005-11-26 . chapter 1amazing. |
 Muggins 2005-11-26 . chapter 1 It sounded like a twist on the 'Mary Had a Little Lamb' poem, i.e. the part that goes, "And everywhere that Mary went, the lamb was sure to go."
You packed a lot of emotion into one sentence. Very powerful. |
 Ajna 2005-11-26 . chapter 1Short, sad, and to the point. Sigh. I'm sure we all feel this way. |
 Princess-anna57 2005-11-26 . chapter 1Wow, powerful! Awesome! Keep writing! ^_^
~Anna~ |
 Naibz 2005-11-26 . chapter 1heh. short and to the point. and yes, thats how it is for us all. cause we learn through pain. sucks doesnt it?good write. |
 lackluster 2005-11-26 . chapter 1the first word that popped into my head was 'classic'.
it seems like a quote more than a poem. i love it. |
 The Light and The Glass 2005-11-26 . chapter 1short and sweet, very good. |