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Narijima
2006-08-03
ch 1,
A very succint, eye-catching way to get your point across and portray a feeling. Nice job.
simpleplan13
2005-11-27
ch 1,
i liek sylvia plath so koodles on the inspiration.. the poem is short and cool.. true for a lot of people too
This Modern Love
2005-11-26
ch 1,
amazing.
Muggins
2005-11-26
ch 1,
It sounded like a twist on the 'Mary Had a Little Lamb' poem, i.e. the part that goes, "And everywhere that Mary went, the lamb was sure to go."

You packed a lot of emotion into one sentence. Very powerful.
Ajna
2005-11-26
ch 1,
Short, sad, and to the point. Sigh. I'm sure we all feel this way.
Princess-anna57
2005-11-26
ch 1,
Wow, powerful! Awesome! Keep writing! ^_^

~Anna~
Naibz
2005-11-26
ch 1,
heh. short and to the point. and yes, thats how it is for us all. cause we learn through pain. sucks doesnt it?good write.
lackluster
2005-11-26
ch 1,
the first word that popped into my head was 'classic'.

it seems like a quote more than a poem. i love it.
Zero-Sum
2005-11-26
ch 1,
short and sweet, very good.
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