A very succint, eye-catching way to get your point across and portray a feeling. Nice job.

i liek sylvia plath so koodles on the inspiration.. the poem is short and cool.. true for a lot of people too

amazing.

It sounded like a twist on the 'Mary Had a Little Lamb' poem, i.e. the part that goes, "And everywhere that Mary went, the lamb was sure to go."

You packed a lot of emotion into one sentence. Very powerful.

Short, sad, and to the point. Sigh. I'm sure we all feel this way.

Wow, powerful! Awesome! Keep writing! ^_^

~Anna~

heh. short and to the point. and yes, thats how it is for us all. cause we learn through pain. sucks doesnt it?good write.

the first word that popped into my head was 'classic'.

it seems like a quote more than a poem. i love it.

short and sweet, very good.