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| Narijima 2006-08-03 ch 1,   | A very succint, eye-catching way to get your point across and portray a feeling. Nice job. |
| simpleplan13 2005-11-27 ch 1, | i liek sylvia plath so koodles on the inspiration.. the poem is short and cool.. true for a lot of people too |
| This Modern Love 2005-11-26 ch 1, | amazing. |
| Muggins 2005-11-26 ch 1, | It sounded like a twist on the 'Mary Had a Little Lamb' poem, i.e. the part that goes, "And everywhere that Mary went, the lamb was sure to go." You packed a lot of emotion into one sentence. Very powerful. |
| Ajna 2005-11-26 ch 1, | Short, sad, and to the point. Sigh. I'm sure we all feel this way. |
| Princess-anna57 2005-11-26 ch 1, | Wow, powerful! Awesome! Keep writing! ^_^ ~Anna~ |
| Naibz 2005-11-26 ch 1, | heh. short and to the point. and yes, thats how it is for us all. cause we learn through pain. sucks doesnt it?good write. |
| lackluster 2005-11-26 ch 1, | the first word that popped into my head was 'classic'. it seems like a quote more than a poem. i love it. |
| Zero-Sum 2005-11-26 ch 1, | short and sweet, very good. |