First-rate writing. Very intense.

The sincerity of the narrator is chilling.

[This has been added to my favorite stories list]

-A05

Quite disturbing, yet at the same time it's... intriguing, I guess. I'm not sure if that's the right word to use or not, but... damn. Very well written.

And thank for the comment!

Cassandra

Wow...quite erie...disturbing...demented...but lovely all the same. For some reason it made me think of my ex...quite odd. .

Um...um...

Your rather intriguing affair gives me a few ideas for Daragott. This was exceptional, and the dark tone has added a pleasant "weight" to the words. My cup is tipped to you, Miss Baine, on a job well-done.

Exceptionally descriptive, disturbingly so, but then the work over all is hard to swallow. It's good though, that's for sure.

... this is VERY dark and disturbing. sick work, but well written.

Wow.. this is rather disturbing, but I like it! I thought the part about leaking goo from her eyes was mildly amusing. Anyway, good writing, quite demented.