Good to see you're not dead and still at it, my friend.

It's very true that the news of a death and the physical proof of death are intensely different experiences.

Hm I really liked that. Very well done.

You can feel it in the folds of the elevarot doors, going to the reception room, even if you don't feel it seeing the cremated bones.

This is really cool. Very real.

There are five thousande two hundred eighty feet in a mile, by the way, but I personally think you should change the second fact to make it wrong too. Because when I first read "two thousand five hundred eighty," I didn't notice it was wrong, and that goes so well with the theme here.

Wonderful description. The narrator is very open, emotionally, allowing the reader to feel more a part of the story... very, very nice.

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