This is such a cool poem! I like how you used different similies throughout for love, it works really well. The title's really good too, works well with the whole poem. And you said you can't write poetry that well...bah! You lie! LIE! This review's getting kinda long...but I'm just gonna keep on talking cause I'm bored. So...writing a little poem are we? hm? Got some...interesting characters? hm? hm? Got a good plot line? hm? Going on three years is it? hm? hm? (teehee, I crack myself up). So yeah...I may scare some people away who read this, but that's okay! I'm sure they won't think YOU'RE crazy...just that you have crazy friends... FRODO LIVES! wow...that was random...I...I think I should go now... It's the Mountain Dew Energy, the caffiene is getting to me! (can't sleep...) :| Frobagg out.