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Reviews For: Silver Serving Spoon

les petits bateaux
2005-12-05
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful and I love the way you used 'silver serving spoon' as a character in here. I find this whole piece light-hearted, even though it's meant to be sorrowful. No matter, hats off to you for a good read.

~~Trinity
Midnight Owl
2005-12-03
ch 1,
abusei like that

it's an interesting metaphor
White Tea and Ginger
2005-11-28
ch 1,
abuseWow. Beautifully written.
Bita-chan
2005-11-27
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful, and I like how the ever little thing you did tied into the imagery of the poem. Good job!
ackronbronze
2005-11-26
ch 1,
abusehey that was a nice poem not only in terms of the content itself... but the way u wrote it...litterally! when u said rain comes down u indented the poem and wrote stanzas in a format that implies something is comming down! It was all out good. Keep writting
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