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| les petits bateaux 2005-12-05 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and I love the way you used 'silver serving spoon' as a character in here. I find this whole piece light-hearted, even though it's meant to be sorrowful. No matter, hats off to you for a good read. ~~Trinity |
| Midnight Owl 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abusei like that it's an interesting metaphor |
| White Tea and Ginger 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. Beautifully written. |
| Bita-chan 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, and I like how the ever little thing you did tied into the imagery of the poem. Good job! |
| ackronbronze 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abusehey that was a nice poem not only in terms of the content itself... but the way u wrote it...litterally! when u said rain comes down u indented the poem and wrote stanzas in a format that implies something is comming down! It was all out good. Keep writting |