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| darkangel140000 2006-02-22 ch 9,  | abusei like the story(hint hint another chappie would be nice)but chapter 9 kinda doesnt seem to flow with the rest of the story there should be some type of chap before it to ease th reader into it or some mention of any kind of speciality of suzy or even tht nick hit her instead of thomas shoutin it out instead of just sticking it in there. there was no mention of this legend before or that suzy was in any way special at all. thus it would be better to kind of ease ppl into wat u r writing. |
| A.Teen Psycho 2005-12-31 ch 2, | abuseHey Great story!Suzy and Thomas seem really close, even though Eduardo and her are close too. So is Suzy a werewolf? Well, duh, the story is called the life of a female werewolf. But does that mean Thomas, Nick, and Thomas are all werewolves? I was thinking the part where Suzy laid her head on Thomas's leg was kind of wolf like behavior so I was thinking those two are both wolves... |