Great...another air head without talent...why do you even bother?...that's right you're an air head...how old are you? 10? Go play in the jungle jim or some thing. Is this entire website filled with 10 year olds? When did they start allowing this?

ah...I love it when last lines always pose a new idea to a story. it's simply wonderful, and it adds a new life to the story. I liked this one too; you have a way with words, evne if you do get a few grammar mistakes mixed up (it's ok, a lot of ppl get these ones mixed up). Anyway, it's a wonderful description. Makes a person wonder what's going on their own head...or maybe that's just me. Sorry, i have to go. not much time on the computer today; so cya!