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| multiples of six 2005-12-06 ch 1,  | abuseVery true & honest; to me at least it feels like you really mean what you're saying. The line "But if I am I scare myself" is interesting. |
| Ajna 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuseNicely done, very true to a point. Though get rid of the caps in the title and summary; hurts the eyes, you know. |