i like this.. especially the ending... cool

reminded me of damien rice with the first line, but otherwise really good.

i love this! its intriguing and not at all how i expected it to be. great work!

i like it, i love it, it works.

it's got this bittersweet sadness to it i feel? its well written but the imagery is interesting, i like how the ideas like perverted soap operas and twisted tales are next to each other.

i also like how you've connected that idea of the beginning and end.

nice work.

.:midnight:.

heh. I can relate. in a way. nice write.

woopah! i thought it would be a soppy romantic; how pleasantly surprising. well done!