I LOVE THIS STORY! I love the storyline and I'm so addicted to it. (Don't ask.) I'm amazingly happy today. =) I really hope you continue adding on to your awesome story. Strangely (because I have a strange mind), I think that Mike is gonna die in some fire but I really hope that it doesn't happen. I think I've been living too long in the movie world. But awesome job! I really do hope that you continue! Keep up the great work!