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| Pyreflei 2007-10-02 ch 1,  | abuseIt sounds like this person cares for you quite a lot. You're lucky. ~Bella, Ayaerhis |
| The angel of Alma 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the line "...you're torn down like a/ wind to a tree." It was pretty much brilliant, as was the line break just there. I think your strong points in this poem are the images. I like it. :) |
| Darq Chinchilla 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abuseThis reminds me of my cousin who's been hurt a while ago. She always hated it whenever anyone would ask her how she was doing after that, but yet her brother was always there for her. It's a lovely poem... |
| Complications 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseIt was easy to follow but vague and it didn't really rhyme -not all poems need to rhyme though- it was interesting |