um..its sorta confusing, but i lke it so far. keep updating!

Oh, I'm intrigued.

Nice writing style - made me laugh.

I like the bit about his dress sense, and the bunny-girls' noses.

Haha.

Nice start! Update soon!

wow! This is hilarious! Great job, I really realy liked the first chapter! Update it soon!

love the format of the story. it seems really interesting too. great job! please update sooN!

Omg! This story is awesome. Aiden is funny. And Daisy is cute. Write more soon D