Truly insightful...I felt like I was part of what this woman was experiencing. Most if not all of what she comments on is true and does happen. There were a lot of powerful sentences or phrases that just struck me. "Surrounding her are shells of people"...just to name one.

You are right though, the ending just didn't...fit. The last three sentences just seemed weird to me I suppose and the second to last sentence was actually a phrase I think.

But ah well, I really enjoyed this. Very insightful!

Very sad and very beautifully written.