This is gorgeous. I certainly love it. I have to check and see if you're on any of my author alerts/fave authors lists, because you definitely should be. The "sticking of gummy tongues" line totally did it for me. I'm favoriting this. (I'm adding you to my fave authors list...I apparently already had you on my author alerts. Go figure.) Keep writing! :)

you are a complete poetic genius.

'radio deaths' 'gummy tongues' . . . wow, some amazing stuff in there.

wow, i loved it

Fascinating; I loved that last line; I don't even really know why, it just fits so perfectly with the rest of the piece. I'm completely speechless; you've floored me, I applaud you.

Juliet.

that was ... amazing. perfect length and effective wording. wow great job.

this is gorgeous. it really is. *added to faves*