Dammit. You make me really ashamed. I envy how you don't fluff your poems with useless imagery. Good job on this.

just too many things to describe. envy, beauty, love are played so naturally and spite seems so evident in this (but I process poetry in this weird it-tells-a-story type of way). lovely, lovely.

* noelle

Oh, dear...that's a very powerful piece, rather...well, confusing, intense...all that good stuff.

It's sad, and I like it...great work, great work.

... wow. this is really intense, very powerful. great work.