Very very well written...I wanted to wait until I'd finished to review..I simply could not stop reading it..Amazing...

These are so whimsical, and remind me of pale, pastel shades of darkness. My favourite ones are "Sunshine is colourless, it tastes of yellow" and "baby blue eyes and a soul as black as morning".

The last one has such a nice contrast. And the first, well I don't really know why I love it so much. It's just so beautiful and abstract.

Wait, how did it take the warmth and leave the light. See, warmth is but a product of light.

Interesting.

Well, this is another one I don't get. How does elusiveness make you poetic anyways?

Yep, always make sure not to drop a silence. See, silences can be very fragile.

No, neither would I. Happiness is a rather nice thing.

Sorry, but I didn't understand it.

But please, don't kill yourself. Twould sadden me greatly.

I must say Autumn is my favorite season. Tis a very pretty time of the year.

"Sunshine is colourless" that bit of the poem is very, very true.

However, the second bit is an insult to the far more significant colors in sunlight.

Interesting bit there. Very kool imagery.

wait, how is morning black. Anyways, most excellent.

Butterflies are pretty. Well, that's just me.

Anyways, excellent bit.

Yes, it is strange how the things that are supposed to send us flying only hold us back in the end.

Great poem/thingy.

-peace out.

great job, once again, but everythings so short, the different poems kinda run into each other,but i know moments are hard to pin down and expresses, and your doing a wonderful job, keep on with everything, and update soon -X

Lovely m'dear! It's nice to see some conciseness...

1. This was probably one of my favorites straight away; so much to say in so few lines. The last two are what really hit, though the first is a nice addition. Cookies and confetti!

2. I didn't quite feel this one, though I did like the "like _, like _" at the end. Just not many fresh images...

5. I liked the sort of calm feeling to this. It reminds me of ze haiku.

6. Hehe. Okay, I totally thought, "Chucky!" (I first spelled that "Chunky.")

7. "It tastes of yellow." I like that, though it's hard to imagine.

11. O, deepness. The distinction between "with" and "for" for what really make this.

13. My other favorite! I had this wonderful image. I don't know if I just watch too much television, but you know those Caprisun commercials with the silver people running around? That's what went through my head. Hee.