I like this story. When I think of the background at the beginning of the story, I think of the fighting scene between Obi-wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker in Star Wars I. However I think there needs to be a better description of Ruin, Page and the Mecromancer. ;-)

Hey, queen of stabbity death, it's yer best pal, Lockcsinger, ya know, the one that goes to an all-girls school and never uses the internet? Yah, well, I saw yer email and signed into Fictionpress for the first time in at least a year. And I'm glad I did--I LOVE it! Ruin... going to the doctor's... clinically dead... fun. Oh, and I loved the messenger's flashback. Laundry is expensive, yah know. So ironic, horribly comedic... something like that. Not very articulate at the moment, here, sorry.But, loved it!Ja matta ne?

Two words. Crazy. Ruin. It's a funny one though! Yippe!

I still love it. It is especially good if you know who Dr. Faust was. Supposedly a/the first necromancer who sold hhis soul to the devil. Dunno that much myself.

AHh, i missed the story before this...oh well. Anyways. this is funny, well thought out. One could make this into a serious, i mean, series. Ruin visits the dentist, ruin visits the Obstetrician, uh, scratch the last one. anyways, good writing.

Lol, this was funny! I loved how the Page was quivering in fear, and Ruin was just miaming bodies as the poor guy tried to talk. I could see it in my head. XD This was so funny. Keep up the good work! :)