this is an excellent story so far. i look forward to reading more. as i read it, i could see the whole thing in my mind, just like i was watching a western movie. good work! update soon!

Hey, I like it! Westerns are one of my favorite things to read, please write more! I found it a bit humorous that the names all started with J- Jacob, Jack and John, but it didn't stand out too much. If you have the time, please reveiw my stuff- "Artur" in particular. Thanks!

Col. Very nice developement through dialogue; instead of just putting the characters' background information out there, you presented it through their conversations. Very nice, although their dialect was more of our twenty-first century lingo rather than that of gunslingers' long ago. Sorry - I had to nitpick a little. This was very good, not obscure in the slightest. Is it the first in a series, or is it meant to stand alone? Sorry it took so long for me to find it! If you've got the time, I have new works up on my account as well. Keep writing!