|Reviews for Smile|
| simpleplan13 11/30/05 . chapter 1
that last line is so powerful and awesome.. i like the way you incorporated dialouge.. very cool
| xoxoMizzatxoxo 11/28/05 . chapter 1
wow vert good i especially loved the last line
| Gabriel Lyman 11/27/05 . chapter 1
*hugs* sorry you needed that lol
very beautiful and well done. I like the emotional conveyance here, and i'd urge you to continue writing.