SPAZZY PENGUIN *TWITCH* *TWITCH*

Wow, that was so...magical! I enjoy your writing so much, and you do it well.I pray that you will continue with this one.

this is a realy good story i loved it and please make more of this story if you can and if you have to re-write it to be longe please i beg you dont let this story slip away

That was interesting, especially the setting. I've never been to anything like it, but I'm assuming you have and have written by experience, so I'm taking most of the descriptions as true. ; And, it's managed to keep my attention 'til the sweet ending. Nice job.