 LilGrimmy 2003-10-17 . chapter 1I really liked the sunburn one. Lots of them were funny, some of them were bad and some of them conveyed quite a scene. I would like to see your other haiku's or any other form of poetry you know. |
 Voicegirl 2002-03-03 . chapter 1 What can I say? Some were good,some were bad, and some were funny. |
 Leah 2001-06-16 . chapter 1 Funny funny |
 Godforsaken 2001-04-11 . chapter 1 i like it!!!! it's funny!!!!! Sunburn is not pretty!!!!!!! LOL! |
 leah 2001-03-11 . chapter 1 Most are funny!! haha |
 Celestia Maxwell 2001-03-08 . chapter 1Interesting. It reminds me of a book, A Lion's Hunger. Those weren't actually that bad. I don't want to see more "crap" haiku, though. Why not use your time to do something that you can consider "good"? |
 bob 2001-03-02 . chapter 1 gum shall be given to dan |
 Teller 2001-02-15 . chapter 1Very good. You kept to the right amount of syllables and still expressed yourself, which I personally find hard to do. meh. Good job! ~Teller |
 Ktara 2001-02-12 . chapter 1Well, Kimi, you think this is bad? Maybe I should post our anime haikus. |