Love the theme here, very nice.

Beautiful, i wish i could hear it to music! I love how hopeful it is.

its good and well done. i love the way you write. awesome work. what is it that you have decicded to do?i like the metaphor of the sewing/weaving/stitching - relates well to a mess of tangled threads.

nice consistance with the sewing theme, I like it, good for a song, keep it up

a hopefully analogy weaved nicely into song. well done.