I think you're one of the few even remotely talented writers on this site. I love the story. It's totally badass. Definitely publication-worthy if you're willing to dedicate the time to it.

is this the end of the story?

I liked how descriptive this was and it's certainly a cut above most pieces on here but I sort of got the impression you made this up as you went along. The moral of the story seems to be "If America can't be in charge blow the world up with nuclear bombs"... it's just not right is it? Still, I enjoyed reading it and that's the main thing.

Hi! This is a really good story! But it is very hard to tell when you switch between characters. Perhaps just a little divider would make it alot easier for readers to follow with the flow of your story.

I want more!