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| Olivine 2006-02-06 ch 1,   | nah-ah. not just words. they did sound good together. really. usually in a random poem i decide to read n review, the author will write the poem, and it doesnt flow so smoothly..like, theres a different amount of sylables in every line. different as in 6 in one line, 12 in another. sometimes that sounds good, but it works much better the way youve written your poem. and you did a very good job of keeping up the rhyming as you wrote it, while also keeping the structure. awesome job. keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:- |
| Arichos 2005-12-11 ch 1, | This is one of your best. I know i've said that like maybe four times, but its true. I really like the description, your poetry is beautiful. |
| Michael l'oeil fol 2005-12-01 ch 1, | think youre a little ** yourself with this one...they may be just words but they are true words written with rhythem and grace...i enjoy something other than the whiny love angst which permeates fictionpress, even if we all are guilty of that at some point, but the smooth flow and expression in your work is enjoyable...write on raven... MLF |
| Syren of the Sky 2005-11-30 ch 1, | oh my god i love this one. so much amazing stuff. absolutely gorgeous. but i do understand how you feel about having a repetitive subject or theme to many of your poems. i went through/am going through a bit of a struggle with that myself. and all i can say is, open your eyes to the world and your mind to yourself. everything you want from your writing is somewhere within yourself, just find it. and certain things in the world will help you dig it out, if you just let them inspire you. look around you-everywhere, something is waiting for you to give it meaning by giving it words. grant its wish. write on! |
| Jenna T 2005-11-28 ch 1, | Bleh? I really liked this piece. It's beautiful. |