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| Pedantmuse 2006-06-06 ch 4, | abusegreat work, a bit confusing to read but the message gets across. I liked how you switched the perspective back and forth, keep working |
| FantasyDance 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseIts great! Congrats. REview my story! Fantasy Dance |
| Zariel 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseyou are so good at fantasy writing! i love this poem its very good but a little bit confusing like who was the person calling out and why did the water go to the moon just little things but BRAVO! |