 Zoƫ Calloway 2006-11-20 . chapter 1 I really like this peom. It has a deep meaning. It really seems to have a message on how people seem to look at others and not really see them. Or how they listen and don't really hear. |
 ADSpencer 2006-01-27 . chapter 1Awesome poem! I love the picture on the wall part. |
 Ryukoji 2006-01-17 . chapter 1-sigh- yepp |
 Former Kimmi Gray 2006-01-12 . chapter 1Ohh me likey... good job. |
 lordelfy 2005-12-08 . chapter 1this is different..but i like the picture u create in my mind |
 Professor Doctor 2005-12-08 . chapter 1Sometimes you scare me. |
 Ajna 2005-12-03 . chapter 1Short, [not-so] sweet, and very nicely done. |
 Broken doll on a dirty shelf 2005-11-29 . chapter 1Heh-welcome to my world. I'm told I always look sad and I'm always getting questioned if I'm depressed. The school goes all out like I'll shoot them up (as well as my friend -^^-, we joke that they're saying will do it as a team). So...yeah, I walk around sad-and-dead but it's just me...I don't think I look that way but hey, I don't have a mirror so...
Harlequin~Please fix me... |
 Patricia Louise 2005-11-29 . chapter 1Good poem. |
 dolly-dear 2005-11-28 . chapter 1great poem |