|Reviews for Paper Wasps|
| McKenzie Drestire 1/20/06 . chapter 1
| Haberdasher 1/16/06 . chapter 1
this was satisfying to read. something about the last verse was so heartfelt and touching. very emotional. just that "god! i cant escape the gravity of you" it stands alone.. brilliant. - the Lady Elaine
| Smoky Bear 12/3/05 . chapter 1
wow! that's poignant! can't pick a favorite line, i'd be quoting most of the poem. the angst, frustration and confusion drip between the lines. it's definately a thinker...