giggle out loud. love poem: passes inspection. very interesting...

a big ass rock I like that line thats about it the only thing that really stuck with me for that poem that line just every time i read it thats all i got out of the poetry Wolf Paw

That big ass rock would be so freaking hard to lift the way your putting it. I mean I'd go rent a crane if I had the money.

"How could I have ever been so blind

to truly believe you loved me"

I hear that more times in a day than I care to count.(Peer counciler)

i am rejoicing in the insanity! awesome once again! thanx so much you rock! your reviews are awesome and yes i have buried myself.

oh, heartwrenching...

hm...sad and touching. cant really say i've been through the same thing but this is good. beautiful ending, keep writing,

mez

Gorgeously brutal. I love it.

Very nicely done. To the point. Good work.

Okay, first I have to say that I love Charlie Brown. The emotions I felt hen reading this were so raw, powerful, real. Just the last few lines brought a tear to my eye. Lovely poem as always.

EB

very good. i fall for the same guy over and over so i can relate. it sucks. great job

excellent way to mesh seemingly unlike things together to create an interesting work. flows well in the transitions.