Reviews for These Streets - FictionPress.com

1001lie 2006-07-15 ch 1,	very nice deary, very nice :)
Black Planet 2005-12-02 ch 1,	i'm going to review everything you have written.. that was an interesting poem.. i don't really take to poems but that one.. it sort of feels as though you are standing right beside the person.. seeing as the person is seeing.. and it takes you on a journey.. a sad one.. but a journey all the same.. keep up the good work alyssa!
WindWing 2005-11-29 ch 1,	wow...this is really good. u described the feeling of giving up hope and trying to survive really well. i in particular iked the last verse. keep writing! (:(:(: Peace Out :):):)
Faithless Juliet 2005-11-29 ch 1,	Very nice; well done. You tell a complete story here, and it goes full circle in your rhyming. Keep up the good work. Juliet.