I posted a very Angsty review on your other story; mostly because you did not take the time to write it within a stone's throw of proper english. I came here to see if this one would be better. (After you said r&r in the Description; I was not optimistic.)

1: Noises will still come through if it is locked and shut... You're thinking of sight, not sound.

2: Regardless of continuity issues; this one is much better.

Forever Alone

-Henry David

It is a good thriller novel about a girl. This is the young adult book or littérateur. Young Adult Literature uses a wide array of themes in order to appeal to a wide variety of adolescent readers.

I really liked this. Please, keep up the good work. I like the develop of the character and I could feel how this could be related to real life. However, I am kind of confused about the characters' feelings. I guess that is understood, since the character does not seem so sure about herself.

This was awesome! UPDATE SOON! :D

wow, that was good! really descriptive, i could picture it all! And your right, we can't understand what they're going through... and its not like the whispering and gossiping will help much. UPDATE SOON!

Nicely written.

It's hard/confusing when you're pregnant, especially as a teenager. You did a lot of "figurative" showing rather than telling, which I liked a lot. At first I was hesitant at reading this, but after the whole thing I actually enjoyed it.

Discount Nike air jordans ( )

Discount Nike Air Max 90 Sneakers ( )

Discount Nike Air Max 91 Supplier ( )

Discount Nike Air Max 95 Shoes Supplier ( )

Discount Nike Air Max 97 Trainers ( )

Discount Nike Air Max 2003 Wholesale ( )

Discount Nike Air Max 2004 Shoes Wholesale

( )

This story has good potential. I like how you switch it from person's view to another. I really shows was a group of friends or teens go through these kinds of situations.

Some parts confuse me a little but thats just me. That part I don't get is Deeann's dream or nightmare. Or is it a memory. I simply don't get it? Did she pass out in school?

wow this is good no really good and i will read more i promise soo far soo great

marti stone, hope you'd read this! but i can't "reply" you anymore, cos i can only review one chapter of urs only once! so i reviewed for both of ur chapters, and now there's nth else to review on... sorry! write a new poem or a story, then! haha! i'd love to c what poem you'd write.

Hey! It's me again! Thanks for replying! It is my first story and I'm new to this, so thanks. I like your story a lot! I love it! Great! Please reply!